Posted by duttydave on 2010-09-29 13:33:02

To convey one's mood
in seventeen syllables
is very diffic

Posted by maysrill on 2010-09-29 17:23:41

5
7
5

Posted by pythrr on 2010-09-30 23:11:12

Feelings, emotions

Math was never easy, no

Squirrels distract me.

Posted by Zodgrot on 2010-10-01 01:08:14

i love it!
thanks :)

Posted by Patrician on 2010-10-01 01:57:09

what no foul? :P

Posted by Fela on 2010-10-01 15:20:17

Easily fixed though:

My turn now, yes. YES!
Need to blitz, block, throw, catch, score.
Failed bone-head roll. NO!

Posted by Fela on 2010-10-01 15:25:43

Also, it's 17 mora, not syllables.

I suppose a japanese might count mood as 2 mora, feelings as 3, though i'm not sure how this is counted in english.

Posted by Sigmar1 on 2010-10-01 20:40:50

Haikus demand skill
get the syllable count wrong
equals Haiku FAEL

Posted by pythrr on 2010-10-02 19:43:08

"Also, it's 17 mora, not syllables."

yes, we know. but English does not ahve moras, and so an Haiku in English is based on the 575 sylllable pattern.

Posted by jarvis_pants on 2010-10-04 15:25:30

I eat the bad food.
In Mouth taste good. Belly Full.
I await the shits.